SPace's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bird is The Word]

looks nice

a few improvements
the flat black on the breast could use some texture or something.
the background on the left shows too much of the light blue that you put down first so it just looks kinda lazy.
the head is really well done though especially its separation from the other parts. looks really clean

Gaz-Metal responds:

Thanks. I agree about the background and I couldn't get the breast right at all so I gave up and just painted it black. I should have put more work in I guess. I'm still experimenting at the mo with paints... it's a new hobby. Hopefully I'll improve.

[I Spy]

bonk

boink

[An Hero]

pretty good

it seems unfinished. i'd say strengthen the line work and the shading it kinda just seems scribbled on. try different brushes for the smoke. also a pipe wouldn't have that much smoke coming out. while working on the shading try to establish a stronger difference in the fabric and the metal on him. its right in some spots but his right arm seems off.
good start!

Van-pl responds:

I wouldn't post unfinished drawing.

Well, the style was meant to be that way, I'm against super-clean and tidy drawings, beacuse they lack some substance.

Too bad you didn't seem to find any artistic value, concentrating on tips how you would draw that.

And hey! Thanks for cheering me up for my start! It's been like 4-5 years since I started taking drawing seriously.

[Malakara]

solid

its a solid drawing with some good style.
some points to work on, the what i guess is her walkman/mp3 player on her hip doesn't look like much other than a lump so ditch it or make it look like something. anatomically speaking the boobs look a little off where they meet. the way her feet are shaded and meet the ground kind of throws off the sense of weight thats otherwise well established from the knees up. it kinda looks like shes sliding forward

[Pattern]

haha wow!

i'm always impressed with colored pencil of any kind.
it really does look incredible.
but nit picking...wouldn't the guitar itself be glossier?
anyway its killer, especially the flower print and the shine on the metal

Bit-Master responds:

It would be glossier if it wasn't 30+ years old. =P

Nonetheless

[Link & Navi: On the Run]

wow

there is something hilarious about this drawing and i'm fairly certain you did not intended it.
also the red/black default gradient in the background is awful, ditch it.

[appalling furry crap pt 1]

who would you be

if you didn't flood this place with animalheaded art?
ryan miller? i guess

SuperSexyActionFurry responds:

you should get him to post his ssaf

[Myself as The Joker]

i kinda agree with glassbomb

but as an actual review: while the features are somewhat in proportion to each other the head shape itself is wrong. the part in the hair makes it so that the crown of your head is to short. the jaw is also just weird. the head is too far forward off the neck

KittyKat87 responds:

Yeah, I know it's not the best. I'll probably go back and fix it someday. Thanks for the honesty. =)

[Fred bonaparte]

hahaha

I remember seeing this on TBA. i really like it.
loved psychonauts and i think you nailed Fred. i'd say the one things that is off is the facial features. i'm sure this is old and you've gotten better, just saying.
have fun on Nachos <3

Emanhattan responds:

thanks sir! Yeh this ones kinda old n shitty but what are we gonna do about it