SPace's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Robert Bryce Milburn]

i miss

w/ hair bryce :c i dig the reflection in the shades. can't wait for more photogrounds

[HOTD Saeko]

needs work

the anatomy is off in a lot of places. the boobs are crooked and sit really awkwardly between her arms. her head sits way forward of the neck. the fingers are very thick.
keep at it though, the shoulders are nice and its a difficult angle

[spandex]

you can taste

the rtil influence. pretty nice, dig the shade colors and the ramona flowers hairdo

Sashura responds:

interesting, i dont think anyone has ever compared my style to rtil's before.

definitely not a bad thing, but i hope i can make mine more distinct eventually

[jaune]

great

great texture on the clothes and wonderful details in the face.
hair highlights could use some of the same detail

kinase responds:

thanks-- I should definitely pay some attention to her hair.

[LJ]

you are getting better

i've seen a lot of your stuff come through the portal and every piece is getting better. everything is too soft though. there needs to be darker darks and harder shading. right now it looks like you are blurring to try and mix the color together and its making the image fuzzy. her left shoulder is a clean edge while her right has that fuzzy glow. the left cheek and eye are the strongest part and i like the purple you put in. the hair also needs some more texture

SgtPooter responds:

Thank you for the comment sir, I really appreciate it :)
I also notice that whenever I start doing some editing, the first thing I see is that I have no dark tones in my picture haha, it's definitely one of those things Im progressively working on making better. It's funny because I attempted to draw this same image last year on a different program, and I guess now Im using it to track my progress in a way. It's also good to hear from another person that Im making some progress, so thanks again my friend
here's my last years version of the pic if you wanted to see:

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs289.snc4/40767_1376398251283_1271645678_30869610_119104_n.jpg

[Marv]

nice

captured the style well, sharp line work. if you have trouble getting the black even (how you can see strokes and spots) you can photocopy/xerox it to make all the blacks the same. or do the same in PS if you don't think its cheating.

Pillowmint responds:

thanks, I was gonna do that, but most of the work I produce now is digital so it was nice to have something done completely by hand, and I wanted to keep that feel. Mind you I did clean it up a bit rendering everything I just said pointless -_-

[feelgood hit of the summer]

mondo cool

your stuff is always so great lankybisquick. but whats up with the uneven text at the bottom?

lenkalamari responds:

thanks!

the texts been bugging me ever since i exported this out of photoshop, i think its something to do with the settings at the top. either that or i might have set the size too small and it went all gay from that

[Toshema]

its pretty good

the chest anatomy is pretty solid but the facial proportions are off. eyes are too big and far apart and the hair line is a little low. also there should be some darker shading. it will help get rid of the soft/mushy look.
also i have no idea what the background is or how he is standing in it.

toshema responds:

Thank you for he critique !!!!!

[The Gay Brothers]

you...

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[Kauckarit]

clearly

you have spent too much time on camp north