its was ok
as i'm sure you've heard a lot this is very Firth inspired. I'd say working from this into your own style would be good, there are plenty of other ways to accomplish the creepy vibe. One of them is to tone down the colors. A lot of the colors used are too bright, like her skin and dress. Also saying things like "a questionable amount of years..." doesn't really make sense, questionable doesn't fit what you are describing.
other than that and touching up general artwork/animation this is pretty swell.
make some more stuff yo